Onomatopoeia. Defined by the Merriam-Webster dictionary as:
the naming of a thing or action by a vocal imitation of the sound associated
with it. For the sake of this
discussion, I'll simply refer to John Prine's song by the same name, taken from
his 1973 album, Sweet Revenge:
"Bang! went the pistol,
Crash! went the window
Ouch! went the son of a gun.
Onomatopoeia--I don't want to see ya
Speaking in a foreign tongue."
Using a word that evokes the sound of the action
you're describing. Genius! Yet another great tool to bring the reader
closer to the action. And as words go,
they're exciting, sizzling, crackling, thumping, whirring, buzzing, screeching,
tick-tick-ticking...you get the idea.
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