Keeping it real. I touched on different aspects of this in a
previous post (research, dialogue, etc.), but let's look at a couple more areas
where this applies. First thing to
remember is that readers are smart. They
pick up on inconsistencies. My daughter
read an early copy of my mid-grade book The Case of Secrets and found
something in the first chapter that didn't jive with something in the last
chapter. Yeah, she's sharp...like her mom. Some other things to watch:
Words - make sure your character
is using words he/she would actually use.
Obviously, these are based on age, occupation, location, situation, and
so on. If your character is 9 years old,
is she really going to use the word "pontificate?" Is grandpa really going to use LOL and LMAO
in a text message? For that matter, does
he even know how to text? If your
character lived in the 1800's, be sure he's speaking and writing in the
language of the day. Hint: It was much
more eloquent.
Choices - Does your character make
choices that fit with how you constructed them?
For example, the neighborhood
bully isn't going to be opening doors and tipping his cap for people. Well...not until that near-death experience
with the psychotic doorman at Vampire Hotel
makes him see the error of his ways.
Sequence of Events - This goes without saying but let me say it
anyway. Pay close attention to plot sequences
in your story. The more complicated the
action/event, the more you need to know how it really happens so you can
describe it accurately. Take
blockbuster author Lee Child, for example.
When Jack Reacher gets into a fight, the author not only describes Reacher's
physical moves, he also describes the resulting effects ( in accurate
physiological terms) of those moves on the challenger. Or, for those who make the mistake of taking
on Jack Reacher, the ones that end up incapacitated or in the hospital.
Good post, and important to keep this in mind when doing your drafts. :)
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