Dialogue is the workhorse of your
story. It holds tremendous power, ageless
beauty, and amazing versatility. I dare
you to name another device that so effectively drives the story forward, conveys emotions, defines
intent, triggers action, masks a lie or spills the truth, reveals character or
lack thereof, and elicits reactions ranging from laughter to tears. Dialogue pulls us in, wines and dines us, and then beds
us down for the night.
...BUT...
Dialogue has to be REAL (i.e. true
to the character). Readers pick up on
things like that. For example, if your
character is a boring dolt he won't be the life of the party, impressing the
guests with his compelling wit. The
heroine of the story won't lull us to sleep.
The evil doctor turned psycho lizard won't be telling jokes...or talking
at all...come to think of it.
In the discussion of "showing vs. telling" (the age old
writer's adage), dialogue is a much more effective (and interesting) way to "show"
the reader what you want to convey.
Don't tell me the new soccer coach is a hot head. Show me with his angry outbursts at the
players and parents. In other words, show
me with his words, don't tell me with yours.
Dialogue is also a great
fixer. The next time you hit a flat spot
in your writing—inject dialogue. Spark
up a conversation. Start an
argument. Whatever. Just crank up the dialogue and then hold on tight. That horse likes to run.
Great advice! I love dialogue. You are right, it's a great way to show who your characters are. There are times when I'll write an entire chapter based on dialogue alone and add the filler later.
ReplyDeleteThat's a great technique!
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